Thursday, March 01, 2007

Three Paragraph Reflection

I identified Steve Erwin and Charles Darwin pretty well and I tried hard to honor them at our resilience cafe. I think thay my artwork showed about Steve Erwin and Charles Darwin pretty good. My artwork showed the resilience that boath of them showed. It had resilient facts about them right by the islands.
Me and Kevin boath worked hard to plan what we where going to say during the resilience cafe. We worked pretty hard as a team to create this whole project. We boath helped each other out with the art and the spoken word piece. I think that I presented my art to the large audience of parents and children pretty good. They seemed to understand pretty good about all of it and didn't look to confused. It was hard to make the explanation of the art piece but I think at the end it turned out pretty good. People read it and told me it was interesting so I guess it was pretty good.
I shared my writing with only two people but none of them had anything negative to say about it. And I think that my spelling wasn't that bad because people read through it and I used spellcheck a couple times. The connection between our two resilient indoviduals was not outstanding but it was just pretty good. I reasearched all about our community member but I did not put it in my polished writing. I don't usually use slang in the first place so I didn't put it in my polished writing. So in this whole project I think that I reached meets because it wasn't terrible but it could have been better.

reflection

In my music piece I did not use many literary elements in my project it is also because I was gone for a whole week and I wasn’t really sure. I did a lot of research on my two characters and I tried to get lot of that information out on to my music. My project did not connect to the civil war in anyway, but there might be some civil rights relationship between them. I thought the connection between our resilient people was very good and very powerful. I thought we expanded enough on there connection too. My recording was pretty good even though I only had a couple days of working because I was sick for a week and there were problems with my music the whole time.

For resilient cafe night I was well prepared and helped get set for it and I was very professional. I tried my hardest that night, I thought my speech turned out very well in the end. I tried to stay as most seriousness I possibly could, and put in sincere effort into my speech. So I overall tried pretty much my hardest. I worked very hard in my lyrics and I also didn't no we were suppose to have literary elements, I might have missed it when I was sick for a week but I did use a lot of historical facts about my resilient people in it.

I tried to have my lyrics as good as they possibly could be, I in fact had people revise my piece. I, myself revised it several times, I had my partner Arman revise it, I had Saul revise it, I don't remember but Gunner might of revised my piece too. I remember most of my websites I used which was wikipedia and other websites.