100 word piece

well i am doing the spoken word piece so the message I was trying to get a cross from my poetry was why they were famous, some interesting facts, and why they were reslient. The biggest one is though is how there resilent. One thing that I kinda didn't show in my poetry was there connection between both characters and it might take them two or three times to find it but thats what I want, cause then they understand my poem a whole lot more. For my poetry we used a garage band drum instrument, bass instrument, and a live guitar played by my partner Arman, if you interested in what song it was it's "dance of death" by Iron Maiden. All those could change at anytime though.
-kevin

darwin and irwin

A connection I have between these to great people is that i also love animals and I have serval. They were both unique in there own ways which I also do because I dont like to follow groups and stuff. Darwin also had great adventures over sea just like I love going over sea. My good connection with irwin was that My whole family loves animals just like irwin.

feed back so far on project

I think we are doing good so far me and arman, our 3d is going to great and the peotry was coming good.
I think we are doing both good equal amount of work even though my partner started pretty late of his project he is still doing good. I think we are going at a good pase and our project is going to turn out good in the end.

poem

my name is charles darwin,
my childhood was not very easy on me,
when I got older I was put throw
in jail for my beliefs on evelutions,

when I got out of jail
I decided to published books on
evelutions anyways,
and my famous book is call "orgin
of species",

i sailed and found the beautiful
galapagos islands,
just because I didn't do good as a child
I still tried what no one else would,
and in the end I earned my own
spot in history.